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1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. ['?plik?bl]
2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
例子：下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
Computer and I
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
分析： exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
例子：下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
Computer and I
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
分析： exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
分析：The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的
分析：The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
分析： For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
分析： For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
不懂的华丽丽的路过 六级写作30个最经典的替换词
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising(有希望的)，
perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, if not most)替换many.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising(有希望的)，
perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, if not most)替换many.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
Eg. sth has gained growing popularity.
popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
.
Eg. sth has gained growing popularity.
popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
得分关键之一就是书写要工整
保证自己写出来的东西少有甚至没有语法错误
不一定要用偏难高深词汇，普通词汇只要不用错就OK了。
考试中布局时，最好在作文的开头和结尾部分，着重突出文采，抓住老师的眼球，增加印象分。
如果你对自己的语法掌握并非绝对自信，那么建议尽可能地运用短语构成词组取代长句，这样可以避免因语法错误而失分。
写完后仔细检查作文中用词、句法方面有无不准确的地方；句式有无变化；句与句之间，段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡等。
有能力的情况下，争取高分作文。标志如下:
1：是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
保证自己写出来的东西少有甚至没有语法错误
不一定要用偏难高深词汇，普通词汇只要不用错就OK了。
考试中布局时，最好在作文的开头和结尾部分，着重突出文采，抓住老师的眼球，增加印象分。
如果你对自己的语法掌握并非绝对自信，那么建议尽可能地运用短语构成词组取代长句，这样可以避免因语法错误而失分。
写完后仔细检查作文中用词、句法方面有无不准确的地方；句式有无变化；句与句之间，段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡等。
有能力的情况下，争取高分作文。标志如下:
1：是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
学生场景
freshman 大一学生www.Ｅxamda.CoM考试就到考试大
sophomore 大学二年级生, 有二年经验的
junior student 大三学生
senior student 大四学生，高年级学生
undergraduate student 本科生
graduate student / postgraduate student 研究生
master's degree 硕士学位
bachelor's degree 学士学位
doctor student / doctor博士研究生
post doctor student 博士后
alumni / alumnus 校友
老师场景
professor 教授
teaching fellow 讲师
tutor / mentor / director / super visor 导师
dean 系主任本文来源:考试大网
department 系
president 校长
staff 全体员工(商店、企业)
faculty 全体教职员工
freshman 大一学生www.Ｅxamda.CoM考试就到考试大
sophomore 大学二年级生, 有二年经验的
junior student 大三学生
senior student 大四学生，高年级学生
undergraduate student 本科生
graduate student / postgraduate student 研究生
master's degree 硕士学位
bachelor's degree 学士学位
doctor student / doctor博士研究生
post doctor student 博士后
alumni / alumnus 校友
老师场景
professor 教授
teaching fellow 讲师
tutor / mentor / director / super visor 导师
dean 系主任本文来源:考试大网
department 系
president 校长
staff 全体员工(商店、企业)
faculty 全体教职员工
2. 上课、选课、听讲座、听报告场景
take the course 选课
drop the course 退课
register 注册
sign up for the course 选课
Pick up = learn
cancel 取消
full 报满本文来源:考试大网
selective course / elective course / optional course 选修课
requirement / required course / compulsory 必修课
lecture 讲座
seminar 讨论班
credit 学分
introductory course 初级课程
advanced course 高级课程
math 数学www.Ｅxamda.CoM考试就到考试大
computer course 计算机
psychology course 心理学
physics 物理学
economics 经济学
computer science 计算机科学
sociology 社会学
geology 地质学
chemistry 化学
biology 生物学
biochemistry 生物化学
science 理科
take the course 选课
drop the course 退课
register 注册
sign up for the course 选课
Pick up = learn
cancel 取消
full 报满本文来源:考试大网
selective course / elective course / optional course 选修课
requirement / required course / compulsory 必修课
lecture 讲座
seminar 讨论班
credit 学分
introductory course 初级课程
advanced course 高级课程
math 数学www.Ｅxamda.CoM考试就到考试大
computer course 计算机
psychology course 心理学
physics 物理学
economics 经济学
computer science 计算机科学
sociology 社会学
geology 地质学
chemistry 化学
biology 生物学
biochemistry 生物化学
science 理科
