主要是我觉得我好像没有写出重点，而且不知道犯了多少语法错误。我下个月要出国，不过我们学校是到了国外再考雅思，所以我现在的英语不怎么样，因此我更着急！所以各位好心人帮忙看看。。呵呵！
题目是can money buy business.
some people think that money is the source of happiness.we can get everything .as long as we have money!but some people think that money is noy of all evil,for example ,the thieves steal something from others in order to get money , drug dealers sell drugs to people and damage theirhealth in order to get money, they forget theirs future ! are they happy?
i think if you don't do something and hurt other people ,you work hard to get money, you can use your money to buy happiness ,because you deserve it.but if you get money from wrongful channel, you can't use yourmoney to but real happiness !
题目是can money buy business.
some people think that money is the source of happiness.we can get everything .as long as we have money!but some people think that money is noy of all evil,for example ,the thieves steal something from others in order to get money , drug dealers sell drugs to people and damage theirhealth in order to get money, they forget theirs future ! are they happy?
i think if you don't do something and hurt other people ,you work hard to get money, you can use your money to buy happiness ,because you deserve it.but if you get money from wrongful channel, you can't use yourmoney to but real happiness !
