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Topic: Some people believe that we should be honest and direct when expressing opinions about others, while others think we should be more diplomatic to maintain good relationships. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Express Opinions Diplomaticly
It is sometimes argued that one should be chosen between diplomatic communications and direct expressions, when we have arguments with the people around us. While some advocate that direct expressions, though sharp to the ears, which can still be immediately effective. Others believe in taking a milder way. In my view, I prefer to adopt the diplomatic way to maintain good relationships.
Initially, mastering the art of tactful communication is essential in our daily interactions. While the straight approach can cut to the chase, it can also add fuel to the fire in heated situations to some extent. Moreover, the diplomatic way of communication undoubtedly can make others to adopt differing opinions easily. The words from your mouth can flow smoothly into the other’s heart like water. Lastly but most importantly, it's undeniable that many people are unwilling to lose their true-hearted friends, considering these harsh words and spur of the moment.
In a nutshell, while honesty remains a virtue, delivering it with a spoonful of sugar through diplomatic communication proves to be the better path forward. What I believe in is that smooth water can be stronger than hard rock.


IP属地:浙江来自Android客户端1楼2024-12-25 21:32回复
    没有仔细看语法
    结构上来看,两个观点共用了一段,内容有点少。最好是分两段来写,一个观点是什么&为什么,另一个观点是什么&为什么
    表达上,议论文一般用第三人称(除了In my view/opinion…这一句),通篇避免使用我(们)和你(们),这种表达不客观。中间有一段用了it’s,不知道是不是打字错误。最后一段的in a nutshell没有见过,感觉不是特别的正式,用In a conclusion/summary会比较好


    IP属地:南非来自iPhone客户端2楼2024-12-26 00:40
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      不是双边讨论吗,另一边哪去了


      IP属地:澳大利亚来自iPhone客户端3楼2024-12-26 06:16
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