【101130求助】关于地主的英文介绍

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楼楼～我也想要二奎的英文介绍，也是英语课做演讲～我想让更多的人了解他，何奈英语很差～

回复：3楼
同感啊，嘿嘿

其实亲可以参考一下我的意见：I like Hangeng very much,he is not noly handsone but also strong.He was a meber of Super Junior before,but he didn'twant to leave China,so in 2009,he come back his ture hometwon.Some persens can't understand his idea.But I think do youself it's most important.Beacuse his strong and cute ,I'll believe he will become the best persen in the world.
   这只是个人意见，亲如果不想采纳请54。。呵呵。

回复：7楼
谢谢亲啦，呵呵

回复：5楼
那亲方便把你做的ppt发给我一份吗，我想参考一下，如何不方便的话，请无视我，呵呵

回复：7楼
“Some persens can't understand his idea”中的“persens”应该为people，persen无复数，people表复数
"But I think do youself it's most important"此句找不到句子主干，改”But I think to be youself is the most important thing "主语是不定式“to be youself ”,is 是系动词，the most important 是表语，构成主系表句子结构,最高级要加the；“Beacuse his strong   and cute ,I'll believe he will become the best persen in the world.”中，his是形容词性物主代词，后不能再加形容词 strong ，cute ；不是”我将会相信“I'll believe ，而是”我相信”I believe ..，建议改“Beacuse his perseverance and hardworking ,I believe he will become the best one in the world.
小小意见，供作者和楼主参考


回复：11楼
嗯，谢谢亲啦，真细心。