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【求助】在下要做英语演讲~~求大神帮忙翻译

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在下下周要做一个英语演讲,想讲“天野明与家庭教师”,但在下英语是渣渣,求英语好的大神帮忙翻译一下,如果能在改一改就更好了~【星星眼】
在下高二水平,希望生词不要太多~跪求啊~~~【扑地】
http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/501856345.html?quesup2&sort=6
↑知道提问连接
1.天野明生于1973年,是日本漫画家,爱知县出身,血型B型,代表作《家庭教师HITMAN REBORN!》在杂志《周刊少年JUMP》上连载,受到很多人的喜爱,粉丝们称呼她为“天野娘”。
2.漫画《家庭教师HITMAN REBORN!》讲述了意大利黑手党彭格列家族第十代首领沢田纲吉与家族成员的成长而展开的一系列故事。通过漫画的描写,天野老师向我们传达出了少年友情的美好与积极向上,勇于拼搏的精神,这是我最喜欢的漫画之一。
3.天野老师是一个非常随和,非常亲切的人,她喜欢在“作者的话”中讨论风物诗、昆虫、食物等话题,很少提到自己。常常在会话中放入拟声词。饲养猫。我觉得她是一个很可爱的人,可惜的是,天野老师始终没有出现在过读者的面前。
4.其实我一开始并不是很喜欢天野老师的画风,因为我觉得前几卷的画风并不是很好看,人物不太可爱。但是几卷过后,天野老师的画风有了很大的改变。人物的肤色开始变化,色彩变得更加明亮,并且人物开始产生个性特征。可以说,《家庭教师》是我看过的少年漫画中人物最好看的漫画
5.前段时间看,《家庭教师》完结了,这部漫画陪伴了我很多年,还记得以前等漫画更新时候的焦急和期待,如今,天野老师为她的世界画上了一个句号,但我认为,漫画虽然完结了,但是天野老师想要通过漫画传递出的感情我永远也不会忘记。
求速度啊~~求大神啊~~~【默默等着】,知道上也提问了,亲们可以去领悬赏~求帮忙啊!【泪目】


1楼2012-11-26 22:52回复
    0 0 我鸟语没那么好


    IP属地:广东来自iPhone客户端2楼2012-11-26 23:46
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      me 还素算了ESL班还没出去的孩子


      3楼2012-11-26 23:50
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        不要这样啊QAQ,没有人能帮忙么【泪奔】


        4楼2012-11-27 06:29
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          帮不上忙的默.


          IP属地:上海来自Android客户端5楼2012-11-27 07:07
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            吾辈虽说在米国= =...但还是很讨厌翻译的〔滚


            6楼2012-11-27 07:51
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              0 0


              IP属地:黑龙江7楼2012-11-27 07:54
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                冒昧地问一句,LL这演讲大概是想把天野娘的这部作品介绍给更多人知道、喜爱吧?
                那简单交待下天野娘此人,然后解释自己由不是很喜欢到喜欢的转变原因,家教这部作品好在哪里值得更多人关注的点在哪里,最后表达下家教带给你个人的影响和感受,按这个思路会不会清晰一点 【好吧个人意见】
                演讲嘛,是要让听众切实感受到台上人的热情的,用亲身体会吸引注意力比一般的介绍要有效的多哦。这么爱家教的LL为回报天野娘自己试试写写先,再让大家帮着改怎么样,毕竟自己的情感到底不能让他人代劳的吖
                没有华丽辞藻复杂句式不要紧,外国人讲话都很少用国人的所谓“好词好句”呢,很好地传达出自己的感情,这样就够了
                LL加油,期待看到你的演讲初稿~~~


                IP属地:江苏8楼2012-11-27 11:01
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                  百度翻译满足你!


                  来自Android客户端9楼2012-11-27 11:53
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                    初三的孩纸默默路过...


                    来自手机贴吧10楼2012-11-27 12:05
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                      废哭瞎


                      IP属地:江西11楼2012-11-27 18:45
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                        你可以发我邮箱我翻译给你


                        IP属地:山东来自iPhone客户端12楼2012-11-27 18:48
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                          ……初中党默默飘过……【其实吧……西班牙看家教的还是挺多的……随便去摘个……


                          来自贴吧神器13楼2012-11-27 19:26
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                            Hello everybody. Do you like reading caricatures? I like reading caricatures very much. Today, I would like to introduce a famous caricaturist for you. She has drawn up my favorite caricature called “HITMAN REBORN”. Her name is Tian Yeming, my favorite caricaturist. Tian Yeming was born in 1973 in Ai Zhi, a city in Japan. Her works “HITMAN REBORN” has been published in <weekly juvenile jump >, a famous magazine which published a large number of juvenile caricatures. Fans called her “mother Tian Ye”.
                            <HITMAN REBORN> is a story about Mafia family
                            Vongola.
                            Tsuna is a common student. One day, a baby called Reborn became his tutor and teaches him how to become a perfect mafia boss. Tian Ye show us the valuable friendship and a positive quality through her caricature.
                            Tian Ye is an easy-going and cordial person. She always talks about poetries, plants and pets with readers and seldom talks about herself in her caricature. I think she is a lovely person. However, the pity is that she never meets reader face to face.


                            Tell the truth, I don’t this caricature at all at first. The pictures look not beautiful enough and the stories are boring. But for some times later, Tian Ye’s caricature has a big change. The color of figures’ skin became more natural. The frame became brighter and seems very comfortable. The story became more interesting and makes my blood boils or stirs. It also became my favorite caricature.

                            A few weeks ago, “HITMAN REBORN” has finished. This caricature keeps me company for many years. I still remember the feeling when I was waiting for update. When I was in blue. “HITMAN REBORN” always give me energy and cheer me up. I will love this caricature forever.
                            我的初稿写出来了~~~感觉还是有点少啊,不知道有没有语法错误神马的,表示抱着小字典各种查~希望能有人帮忙改改【戳手指】


                            14楼2012-11-27 20:06
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                              1.caricature更侧重讽刺漫画,这里简单点reading comic books或许能更快让听众明白主题,下同
                              2.caricaturist同上,用cartoonist或其他
                              introduce sb/sth to sb 将……介绍给……

                              3.
                              ……to you, who has ……”H R”——Tian Yeming.此处可并成一句
                              【段落分割线】

                              4.演讲偏向人物介绍的话可以对天野娘此人详细介绍,不然似乎没什么必要。JUMP的话,除非是为了点出能登上这杂志是对作品作者的无尚认可不然也不需细讲的样子。
                              果然如果要介绍的话后面那段得提上来……
                              Tianye is a gentle and easy-going person who favors poetry, plants and pets a lot. (cordial主要意思似乎不在亲切上)


                              IP属地:江苏本楼含有高级字体15楼2012-11-27 23:57
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