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CATCH YOUR OWN HAPPINESS
Ashputtel is a orphan. When she losts her parents, a woman take her in. So Ashputtel really thanks that. In fact, she has a big trouble with her new family. They don’t like her. Since she comes this family, she always dusty and dirty.
“Ashputtel! Come here! Make it clean!” Vivi said. She is one of the member in new family.
“oh! Vivi! I call her first! Help me dress up,quickly!”Vivian is angry, “Ashputtel, you are too late!”
“Oh, my dear baby!
I feel uncomfortable, let her care me. Ashputtel, come here,quickly!” Their
mother said.
Always like this,
she likes a tool. She should do most thing every day. She has no time and can’t
relax . Her sisters and mother all know it, and they think it’s good. Though
she work almost whole day, she still love them. Because they take her in. Just
they take her in. She also know they don’t like her, because they aren’t really
relative.
One day, Ashputtel
go to fair to buy some commodity. She always come here and buy something. But today,
Ashputtel is unlucky. A horse almost hit her. Maybe the groom is good at drive.
The horse is stop. But the thing is not end. The person who sit in gharry is
unhappy. Unlucky, the person is prince.
“Today is my
unlucky day.” Ashputtel thought.
“Why are you stand
in road? Don’t you know I am coming?” The prince said. Ashputtel is really
unlucky. Prince is angry today as the king wants choose his wife in a party. He
doesn’t like it, but he can’t be angry with king. In this time, the gharry
stop. This is why prince so angry.
“I’m sorry.” She said.
She always says that. If she do something, she always says sorry first, though
it’s not her mistake.
“You make me
angry. So you need to be punished. En,let me see…”The prince said.
“Prince, can I say
a word?” A knight said.
“Sure. What ?” The
prince asked.
“There is street.”
The knight said.
“Oh, I know it,
this thing is a joke.” The prince said, “ En, the punish is you should go home
with my knight.” Ashputtel is very surprise and a little blush.
“Can I ask you
something, Ashputtel?” the knight said in Ashputtel’s home way.
“what?” Ashputtel
answered. And she still blush.
“Do you like
prince?” The knight said.
“It’s impossible. Why
you ask this question ?” Ashputtel is very surprised.
“En, nothing.” The
knight is also blush,”He is a good person, and very kind. And I love you.”
“You said is
wrong! It’s impossible! He is a bad… Wait! What did you say?”Ashputtel doesn’t
believe her ears.
“I love you ! I always
saw you with covert in street. Maybe you don’t know.” The knight is very blush.
“I love you , too.
But my family…”Ashputtel is worried.
“I can take you
run away, if you want.”
Ashputtel doesn’t
know how to answered. She want live with him, but she is timid.
The knight doesn’t
say anything.
Love will make
people brave. “I’ll do it.” Ashputtel said, ”it’s my answer.”
Ashputtel catch
her happiness. What about you?
The story has a
good end, though it ‘s a little different. The Ashputtel and knight happiness
of life together., or not prince. Oh, you asked me what about prince? I don’t
know. And I also don’t care about him. Knight and Ashputtel are protagonist,
aren’t they?


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