可能漏了点信息……
我明天还会再考一次。下一次考试时间是定在了7.6
大学的deadline是7.25
谢谢各位了！
求点建议……
下面是我的几篇写作……

拿点范文什么的模仿下应该就没问题了……

Q：The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in young people. Do you agree or disagree? In what ways should the country invest in young people?
The fierce competitions between countries force the governments look for a way to prepare for their tomorrows. Meanwhile, youngsters are normally recognized as the future of a country. Some point out that it would be help for a better country if governments put more resources in youth. From my point of view, such investments could be in education and public health.
First of all, supporting free primary and secondary education would help. As all we know, education is not only the foundation of a country, but have profound influences in lives. After being educated, youngsters would have more skills, as a result, the society would work in a higher efficiency. Investing in education would also allow science and technologies develop faster. Japan, for example, the government has invested a great amount resources in education since the end of the World War II because they always believe that education is the cheapest national defence. Up to now, scientist from Japan have a wide range contributions in field like natural science (such as genetic programmes) and technologies (such as electrical paper and the industry of photography).
Furthermore, there should also have some preparation in healthcare. A saying says that health is the only personal capital for all further developments. Government should not just invest in prevention of some diseases for children, but the definition of the healthy lifestyle should also be included. The case of smoking could be an example. Many years ago, people might not recognize the danger that the behaviour of smoking would bring. However, in recent decades, scientist pointed out that there were enormous amount of carcinogens containing in cigarette. Many students were shown the comparison between a health lung and the lung of a smoker so that they were no longer considering smoking as a behaviour of maturation. It does contributes in decreasing the number of lung cancer.
There are also many fields that governments should invest in. However, education and healthcare as fundamental factors of life, should be paid attention.

It is generally believed that some people are born with
certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However,
it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports
person or musician.
Discuss both these views and
give your own opinion.
Q:The issue of how to reach the top level of some fields is great interest of social as a whole. Some people suggest that training is the best way for them to reach while other believe that if they have no born talent in those fields, they are impossible to be the best.
Talent is very important. People with these talents would be easier to reach those achievements that others might never arrive. Many proofs in the real life show that God only bestows certain talents to some individuals while others do not have that luck. However,talent is not the only factor of success. It has some effects however if a person reach those achievements, since then they just lie on what they get,they would be easily overstepped.
Training makes normal become good and perfect become great. It has much stronger effect than passion. Because passion or interest allow people to concentrate on what they like but the dreams and desires are transformed to the fact by practising. If a person is provided a scientific method of training, he can get the best result. By training and regular practice, anyone can gradually control the weakness and enhance the strength. Secondly, a man with the talent gifted from God is unlikely to become a star without practice. There was a story about a child with inborn talent in China. He was so clever that he was able to write those beautiful and elegant poems when he was just five years old. However, without further learning, he became a normal person in his twenties. Hence, it proofs the saying that practise makes perfect.
In short, talent are just the catalyst to success but training is the deciding factors of being at the top of a field.

4楼的：
Fierce international competitions force governments to look for ways to plan for tomorrow. As youngsters are widely recognized as the future of a country, some claim that it would be beneficial to put more resources in nurturingthe youths. This is undoubtedly a strong argument, and the primary focus of the governments should be on education and health care.
（注：虽说本来有个“From my point of view ...”的句子来侧面表示你同意这样的观点并想延伸，但是还是明确些比较好，方法可参考红字部分。另外尽量避免第一人称）
First of all, it is crucial to improve the quality of education. It is known that education does not only fortify the foundation of a country but has profound lifelong influences on individuals. Skills to enhance social progress are acquired in one's youth through schooling. If properly trained and educated, youngsters would successfully put their skills into practice upon entering the workforce. This would also allow science and technologies to develop faster. The Japanese government, for example, has invested a great amount of resources in education since the end of World War II in the belief that education is the cheapest national defence. Up to now, scientists from Japan have enormous contributions in fields ranging from genetic programming to industries of electrical paper and photography.
（注：注意用词的准确性，比如并不是社会以更高的效率工作--工作的是人--而是高效率的工作推动了社会的进程。注意插入词组的用法，比如for example，因为不影响句子结构所以就算去除了句子也要通顺才行。另外就是一开始提到了free primary and secondary education，但是后面却只讨论了教育的广泛影响而没有具体化到阶段。毕竟英式里面这指的就是小学和中学教育，如果不说清楚的话别人可能会问“难道大学教育就次要了么？”。对此我做了些修正）
Healthcare is another main piece, just as a saying goes that health is the only personal capital for all further developments. Government should not just invest in disease prevention, but also in inculcating young people in how to live a healthy lifestyle. Take smoking as an example. Many years ago, people might not recognize the danger that smoking would bring. However, in recent decades, scientists pointed out that there were enormous amount of carcinogens contained in cigarettes. In fact, pictorial comparison between a health lung and the lung of a smoker has been shown to school kids occasionally in an attempt to dispel the incorrect perception that smoking is an indication of maturation. It does contributes to decreasing the number of cases of lung cancer.
（注：还是注意用词准确性。比如说Government should invest in prevention那句话，因为前后是并列的，所以原句后半段就变成说invest in definition了，逻辑上不通；最后那里也是，数量上减少的是病例，不是疾病本身）
In conclusion, education and healthcare of the young population are the most fundamental elements in improving social progress that can never be emphasized too much.