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怎么掉出前十了呢

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谁给我经验


1楼2013-06-22 23:46回复
    随便复制粘贴几个作品经验马上到手,但是你要原谅我的娇气的手机复制不了、、


    IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧2楼2013-06-23 00:00
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      好吧 有空我多搞点


      3楼2013-06-23 00:07
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        SONNET #1
        by: William Shakespeare
        FROM fairest creatures we desire increase,
        That thereby beauty's rose might never die,
        But as the riper should by time decease,
        His tender heir might bear his memory;
        But thou, contracted to thine own bright eyes,
        Feed'st thy light's flame with self-substantial fuel,
        Making a famine where abundance lies,
        Thyself thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel.
        Thout that are now the world's fresh ornament
        And only herald to the gaudy spring,
        Within thine own bud buriest thy content
        And, tender churl, mak'st waste in niggarding.
        Pity the world, or else this glutton be,
        To eat the world's due, by the grave and thee.
        对天生的尤物我们要求蕃盛,
        以便美的玫瑰永远不会枯死,
        但开透的花朵既要及时雕零,
        就应把记忆交给娇嫩的后嗣;
        但你,只和你自己的明眸定情,
        把自己当燃料喂养眼中的火焰,
        和自己作对,待自己未免太狠,
        把一片丰沃的土地变成荒田。
        你现在是大地的清新的点缀,
        又是锦绣阳春的唯一的前锋,
        为什么把富源葬送在嫩蕊里,
        温柔的鄙夫,要吝啬,反而浪用?
        可怜这个世界吧,要不然,贪夫,
        就吞噬世界的份,由你和坟墓。


        4楼2013-06-23 13:25
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          SONNET #2
          by: William Shakespeare
          WHEN forty winters shall besiege thy brow
          And dig deep trenches in thy beauty's field,
          Thy youth's proud livery, so gazed on now,
          Will be a tottered weed of small worth held:
          Then being asked where all thy beauty lies,
          Where all the treasure of thy lusty days,
          To say within thine own deep-sunken eyes
          Were an all-eating shame and thriftless praise.
          How much more prasie deserved thy beauty's use
          If thou couldst answer, 'This fair child of mine
          Shall sum my count and make my old excuse,'
          Proving his beauty by succession thine.
          This were to be new made when thou art old
          And see thy blood warm when thou feel'st cold.

          当四十个冬天围攻你的朱颜,
          在你美的园地挖下深的战壕,
          你青春的华服,那么被人艳羡,
          将成褴褛的败絮,谁也不要瞧:
          那时人若问起你的美在何处,
          哪里是你那少壮年华的宝藏,
          你说,"在我这双深陷的眼眶里,
          是贪婪的羞耻,和无益的颂扬。"
          你的美的用途会更值得赞美,
          如果你能够说,"我这宁馨小童
          将总结我的账,宽恕我的老迈,"
          证实他的美在继承你的血统!
          这将使你在衰老的暮年更生,
          并使你垂冷的血液感到重温。


          5楼2013-06-23 13:26
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            SONNET #3
            by: William Shakespeare
            LOOK in thy glass, and tell the face thou viewest
            Now is the time that face should form another,
            Whose fresh repair if now thou renewest,
            Thou dost beguile the world, unbless some mother.
            For where is she so fair whose uneared womb
            Disdains the tillage of thy husbandry?
            Or who is he so fond will be the tomb
            Of his self-love, to stop posterity?
            Thou art thy mother's glass, and she in thee
            Calls back the lovely April of her prime;
            So thou through windows of thine age shalt see,
            Despite of wrinkles, this thy golden time.
            But if thou live rememb'red not to be,
            Die single, and thine image dies with thee.
            梁宗岱 译 -莎士比亚-十四行诗集

            照照镜子,告诉你那镜中的脸庞,
            说现在这庞儿应该另造一副;
            如果你不赶快为它重修殿堂,
            就欺骗世界,剥掉母亲的幸福。
            因为哪里会有女人那么淑贞
            她那处女的胎不愿被你耕种?
            哪里有男人那么蠢,他竟甘心
            做自己的坟墓,绝自己的血统?
            你是你母亲的镜子,在你里面
            她唤回她的盛年的芳菲四月:
            同样,从你暮年的窗你将眺见--
            纵皱纹满脸--你这黄金的岁月。
            但是你活着若不愿被人惦记,
            就独自死去,你的肖像和你一起
            ...


            6楼2013-06-23 13:26
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              用我最真诚的热心来为你盖楼祝你天天开心


              IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧7楼2013-06-23 14:11
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                其实我只是想说一刀真的很久不见


                IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧8楼2013-06-23 14:12
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                  你掉了名次也是在情理之中的嗯如果你不服气


                  IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧9楼2013-06-23 14:13
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                    我也没有其他办法只能在这里默默地


                    IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧10楼2013-06-23 14:13
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                      帮你刷点经验虽然刚刚写信真心让我手酸


                      IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧11楼2013-06-23 14:14
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                        好吧貌似室友都睡着了我想我也应该好好休息了


                        IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧12楼2013-06-23 14:15
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                          但愿期末考试能够不要那么折磨人


                          IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧13楼2013-06-23 14:15
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                            嗯再水一帖奇怪了我打一帖二字出来的居然是诸葛好吧


                            IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧14楼2013-06-23 14:16
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                              真的是再水一帖然后走人美容是多么重要的事啊于女孩而言一刀你看


                              IP属地:天津来自手机贴吧15楼2013-06-23 14:17
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