【求超tiáo越jiào】米娜觉得这句话翻译的肿么样！？

【原文】: I feel the delightful texture of a flower,and discover its remarkable folds;and something of the miracle of Nature is revealed to me.
【我的翻译】：仰观神奇自然之奥妙，俯察细腻花瓣之纹理。