练笔，很失败

课上老师讲评练笔作业，是开头段。评价是我的模版句用得不好，逻辑方向有问题，散散地把第一段凑了将近一百个词，不按照要求写。如何改善啊，被打击得都呆掉了。

题目：The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed，but it also create problems that did not exist before.

What the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest？

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