“众里寻他千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在灯火阑珊处。”这句诗我翻译了很多遍但总是觉得不妥。希望有更好的意见He【英语吧】

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“众里寻他千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在灯火阑珊处。”这句诗我翻译了很多遍但总是觉得不妥。希望有更好的意见

He found the degreeses, suddenly look back, that person but in the lights dim。
Hundreds and thousand of times I searched for her in the crowd .Suddenly
I turned ,and there she stood in the dim light.
不知道这两个翻译哪个好一点，或者你有更好的意见

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许渊冲、许明译：
But in the crowd once and again
I look for her in vain.
When all at once I turn my head,
I find her there where lantern light is dimly shed.
English Translation of Chinese Poetry —— 中文詩詞英譯（曾培慈）：
In the crowd I look for her presence everywhere time and again,
Suddenly I turn around, and I see her there,
Where lights are dim and faint.

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