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发不起~

michelle ye born in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province in early 1980, she began to learn a variety of childhood dance, piano, calligraphy and so on.

Her parents divorced at age 9, and 10-year-old with his father emigrated to the U.S., from the age of 13 michelle ye to be completely independent in a foreign country solely responsible for their lives and their studies, made her independent personality

michelle ye attended high school in the United States John Dewey High School, the prestigious Ivy League universities in the University Wesleyan College.

Her TV work includes: "fengshenbang," "zaishengyuan" "yunhaiyugongyuan" "xixiangqiyuan", "tianxiadiyi" and "buxitianhou" "guosetianxiang", etc.

Her films include: "qingyiwxinzhi," "yiwai", "huolongduij" "Cai Lifo boxing 2010" and so on.

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自己写的【当然有一些参假部分，补习老师帮写了一些~】

michelle ye于1980年初出生于浙江省杭州市，她从孩提时代就开始学习各种舞蹈，钢琴，书法等。
michelle ye9岁时父母离异，10岁随父亲移民美国，，从13岁起，michelle ye就完全独立，在异国他乡全权负责自己的生活与学业，造就了她独立自主的性格。
michelle ye中学就读于美国John Dewey High School，大学在著名常青藤学府卫斯理学院。
1999年，纽约华裔小姐选美，胜出后又代表美国纽约参加国际华裔小姐竞选，以其过人的学识谈吐与大气典雅的气质成功夺取[冠军]及[最具古典美态奖]。
她的演艺生涯从此开始。

第二段的~
等等在发英语的~
补习老师还没发给我~

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谢谢蓝莓~

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谢谢蓝莓了~