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19) " George reckons he had a booger- flavored one once."‘乔治说，有一次他还吃到过一粒带干鼻子牛儿味的豆子呢。’ （‘乔治说，有一次他还吃到过一粒带干鼻涕味的豆子呢。’）[真不知道 ‘鼻子牛儿’是哪里的方言土语，人文社应该用普通话翻译]
21) She had a bossy sort of voice, lots of bushy brown hair, and rather large front teeth. 她有一头浓密的棕色头发和一对大门牙。 （她有一头浓密的棕色头发和相当大的门牙。）[人的门牙不止一对；原文也没有说是多少。还是避免给出准确数字为妙]
22) She said all this very fast.Harry looked at Ron and was relieved to see by his stunned face that he hadn’t learnt all the set books off by heart either.她连珠炮似的一气说完。（她所有的话都说的很快。哈利看着罗恩。他着实松了一口气，因为他从罗恩吃惊的脸上看出，罗恩也没有把所有的课本全都背下来。）[Harry looked at Ron and was relieved to see by his stunned face that he hadn’t learnt all the set books off by heart either.全部漏译]
27）Perched atop a high mountain on the other side, its windows sparkling in the starry sky, was a vast castle with many turrets and towers. 湖对岸高高的山坡上耸立着一座巍峨的城堡，城堡上塔尖林立，一扇扇窗口在星光下闪烁。 （湖对岸高高的山坡上耸立着一座巍峨的城堡，城堡上塔尖林立，角楼起伏，一扇扇窗口在星光下闪烁。） [turrets 漏译]
1）The stone walls were lit with flaming torches like the ones at Gringotts, the
ceiling was too high to make out, and a magnificent marble staircase facing them led to the upper floors.象古灵阁一样，石墙周围都是熊熊燃烧的火炬。天花板高得几乎看不到顶。正面是一段豪华的大理石楼梯，直通楼上。 （象古灵阁一样，石墙是由熊熊燃烧的火炬照明的。天花板高得看不到顶。面对他们的是一段豪华的大理石楼梯，直通楼上。） [were lit 没有正确译出；‘天花板高得看不到顶’中自作主张加了‘几乎’；facing them 是‘面对他们’，不是‘正面’]
ceiling was too high to make out, and a magnificent marble staircase facing them led to the upper floors.象古灵阁一样，石墙周围都是熊熊燃烧的火炬。天花板高得几乎看不到顶。正面是一段豪华的大理石楼梯，直通楼上。 （象古灵阁一样，石墙是由熊熊燃烧的火炬照明的。天花板高得看不到顶。面对他们的是一段豪华的大理石楼梯，直通楼上。） [were lit 没有正确译出；‘天花板高得看不到顶’中自作主张加了‘几乎’；facing them 是‘面对他们’，不是‘正面’]
2） But before you take your seats in the Great Hall, ‘……不过你们在到餐厅入席之前……’（‘……不过你们在到大礼堂入席之前……’） [后面的各部中Great Hall 都是译为‘大礼堂’ 的。专有名词的翻译要统一]
3） "How exactly do they sort us into houses?" he asked Ron. ‘他们怎么能准确地把我们分到哪所学院去呢？’他问罗恩。（‘到底怎样分院呢？’他问罗恩。） [they 在这种情况下并不指‘他们’，而是‘有人’一类意思，此处完全可以不翻；How exactly 问的是分院是如何进行的，而不是对是否准确表示怀疑]
5） He'd never been more nervous, never, not even when he'd had to take a school report home to the Dursleys saying that he'd somehow turned his teacher's wig blue. 他从来没有象现在这样紧张过，从来没有，即使他把学校报告书交给德思礼夫妇：报告书上说他把老师的假发套变成了蓝色。（他从来没有象现在这样紧张过，从来没有，即使在他不得不把一张学校报告拿回家交给德思礼夫妇时：报告上说他不知怎地把老师的假发变成了蓝色。）[he'd had to 漏译；somehow漏译]
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