20) "Bleaaargh -- see? Sprouts."‘唉呀呀，明白了吧？芽豆。’ （‘唉呀呀，明白了吧？球芽甘蓝。’）[人文社在《混血王子》16章中正确地翻译了这个词]

21) She had a bossy sort of voice, lots of bushy brown hair, and rather large front teeth. 她有一头浓密的棕色头发和一对大门牙。 （她有一头浓密的棕色头发和相当大的门牙。）[人的门牙不止一对；原文也没有说是多少。还是避免给出准确数字为妙]

22) She said all this very fast.Harry looked at Ron and was relieved to see by his stunned face that he hadn’t learnt all the set books off by heart either.她连珠炮似的一气说完。（她所有的话都说的很快。哈利看着罗恩。他着实松了一口气，因为他从罗恩吃惊的脸上看出，罗恩也没有把所有的课本全都背下来。）[Harry looked at Ron and was relieved to see by his stunned face that he hadn’t learnt all the set books off by heart either.全部漏译]

25）"……I've just been up to the front to ask the conductor, and he says we're nearly there……" ‘我刚到车头上问过司机，他说我们就要到了。’（‘我刚到前头问过列车员，他说我们就要到了。’） [Conductor 错译]

26）Nobody spoke much. 没有人说话。 （没人多说话） [错译。不知道是无意的还是有意的]

27）Perched atop a high mountain on the other side, its windows sparkling in the starry sky, was a vast castle with many turrets and towers. 湖对岸高高的山坡上耸立着一座巍峨的城堡，城堡上塔尖林立，一扇扇窗口在星光下闪烁。 （湖对岸高高的山坡上耸立着一座巍峨的城堡，城堡上塔尖林立，角楼起伏，一扇扇窗口在星光下闪烁。） [turrets 漏译]

第七章

1）The stone walls were lit with flaming torches like the ones at Gringotts, the
ceiling was too high to make out, and a magnificent marble staircase facing them led to the upper floors.象古灵阁一样，石墙周围都是熊熊燃烧的火炬。天花板高得几乎看不到顶。正面是一段豪华的大理石楼梯，直通楼上。 （象古灵阁一样，石墙是由熊熊燃烧的火炬照明的。天花板高得看不到顶。面对他们的是一段豪华的大理石楼梯，直通楼上。） [were lit 没有正确译出；‘天花板高得看不到顶’中自作主张加了‘几乎’；facing them 是‘面对他们’，不是‘正面’]

2） But before you take your seats in the Great Hall, ‘……不过你们在到餐厅入席之前……’（‘……不过你们在到大礼堂入席之前……’） [后面的各部中Great Hall 都是译为‘大礼堂’ 的。专有名词的翻译要统一]

3） "How exactly do they sort us into houses?" he asked Ron. ‘他们怎么能准确地把我们分到哪所学院去呢？’他问罗恩。（‘到底怎样分院呢？’他问罗恩。） [they 在这种情况下并不指‘他们’，而是‘有人’一类意思，此处完全可以不翻；How exactly 问的是分院是如何进行的，而不是对是否准确表示怀疑]

5） He'd never been more nervous, never, not even when he'd had to take a school report home to the Dursleys saying that he'd somehow turned his teacher's wig blue. 他从来没有象现在这样紧张过，从来没有，即使他把学校报告书交给德思礼夫妇：报告书上说他把老师的假发套变成了蓝色。（他从来没有象现在这样紧张过，从来没有，即使在他不得不把一张学校报告拿回家交给德思礼夫妇时：报告上说他不知怎地把老师的假发变成了蓝色。）[he'd had to 漏译；somehow漏译]

6） About twenty ghosts had just streamed through the back wall. 从他们背后的墙上突然蹿出二十来个幽灵。（从后墙上突然蹿出二十来个幽灵。）[the back wall 没有‘他们背后的墙上’的意思，而是相对于房间本身的方位]

7） "About to be Sorted, I suppose?" ‘我想，大概是准备接受测试吧？’（‘我想是要分院了吧？’）[to be Sorted 本身并没有‘接受测试‘的意思]

8）and through a pair of double doors into the Great Hall. 经过后面一道双开门进入豪华的餐厅。（经过一道双开门进入大礼堂。） [‘后面’和‘豪华的’都是人文社自己加上去的]

10） At the top of the hall was another long table where the teachers were sitting. 餐厅上首的台子上另摆着一张长桌子，那是教师们的席位。（餐厅上首另摆着一张长桌子，那是教师们的席位。） [不知道人文社从哪里找到了一个‘台子’？]